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Rhythm and movement
Line editing hears how a paragraph moves: where it gathers force, where it pauses, and where a sentence has more weight than it needs.
02 · Line editing
Line editing: the sentence-level pass that makes the argument land
Line editing works paragraph by paragraph. It attends to rhythm, clarity, emphasis, and the relation between a writer’s voice and the reader’s understanding.
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Clarity without flattening
The aim is not to make every voice efficient or uniform. It is to remove the fog that keeps a good thought from reaching its reader.
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Emphasis and proportion
A sentence-level pass helps the important parts feel important, so the book’s attention is not spent evenly on everything.
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The author’s voice
Your voice is not an ornament to preserve after the work is done. It is part of the work, and the edit should make it more legible.